Whiskey Rasp

[Vagabond]

Alrighty....this is one that I have up at my deviantArt account. Dedicated to Mr. Madsen with images taken from various films kind of rolled into one.

Whiskey Rasp[/u]

Whiskey rasp,
raw and real.
There's nothing like it,
nothing...
When he looks at you
with those dangerous eyes,
dragging on a Camel,
you know where his mind is at.

I'm his Lady Luck tonight,
dressed to kill
in drop dead red.
In those smoke filled rooms
with late night cards,
Frank and the boys singin' sweet,
Remy Martin in a glass...
and all is right
with this sad sad world.

[Madsengirl]

Excellent! Love that one!

[TsnMMFan]

I like the raw emotion in this one. Poetry is difficult because of the need to convey a visual to keep people reading. More so with poetry, it's difficult to keep people interested or even reading, but after reading this I would gladly sit down with a book full of poems from you Vagabond and read to my hearts content.

Please indulge us with some more of your prose.

[Vagabond]

*blushes*

Thanks!

[Madsengirl]

BTW...I added a Fan Poetry section to the site & put Ang's b-day poem & Vags recently submitted poem on there. here' the link to check it out:

www.angelfire.com/celeb/addictedtomadsen/fanpoetry.html

[TsnMMFan]

Madsengirl said:

BTW...I added a Fan Poetry section to the site & put Ang's b-day poem & Vags recently submitted poem on there. here' the link to check it out:

www.angelfire.com/celeb/addictedtomadsen/fanpoetry.html

Cool deal! Looks awesome!

[Nove]

Loved that poem.Whiskey Rasp,it sent chills up my spine. Some more please.

Nove.