Victims, aren't we all?

[thedude]

This is just something I threw together..

It's about something.. I think.. Maybe an Ex GF...

For those of you wondering why I may call this poetry but still give it a "chorus"... I did that to f**k you. So by all means go crazy... In all seriousness I suppose it's more of a song than a poem but basically all songs are pretty much just poor little helpless poems, until someone gets up and sings them.

I'm flying off a mountain's ledge
Feels like the pain has lost its edge
I got a long way down
But it's a hell of a ride
Can't wait to see you on the other side


I think I'm getting dizzy
Could just be the drugs
He can't be serious, is he?
Tell me he's just f**kin' with us

Fallin faster and faster
Like dead weight should
I forget what I came after
But I know it can't be good

(chorus)

Long after the fall
Victims, aren't we all?
Taken too soon?
Under a blood red moon

Some just won't heed their calls
Some, I guess just lack the balls
Oh Victims, aren't we all?

(chorus)

Taking the plunge into a black abyss
Never thought it would all end like this
Just let me have one sweet final kiss
C'mon now baby, give me deliverance
Before I'm sent off to the Judgment Bench

The man at the gate says it's too late to repent
I used up all my chances
All my miracles are spent
I never quite got the hint
Oh my, holy nuts
I think they're gonna feed me to the serpents in the pit

Well I've reached the point of no return
Still I have no fear of the fires that burn
Some of us may never learn

Lessons are for people
Who give a damn
The only point I'm stressing
Is I don't need you holding onto my hand

(chorus)

Long after the fall
Victims, aren't we all?
Taken too soon?
Under a blood red moon

Some just won't heed their calls
Some, I guess just lack the balls
Oh Victims, aren't we all?

(chorus)

[Madsengirl]

Pretty cool Dude...I like.

[Nove]

Hell's bell's Dude,you're another Michael Madsen. Write some more stuff and get published. You have the talent. I like you're stuff.
Nove.

[thedude]

Thanks girls, I don't even think of myself as in the same hemisphere with Mikey, but seeing somebody else thinks so is truly flattering. If there's ever a book of Dude poetry out there, you all will be the first to know.